*Eyes:emerald forest green *Fur:tan, chocolate brown, and black *Scars:none *Deformities:none *Size:average, though taller than some Description:Has a tan, chocolate brown and black molted pelt with a white tip on his tail and white teeth and claws. His eyes are a emerald forest green. Fur is short and overall he is of an average standard, although he is a bit tall compared to some cats. Picture:none
*Personality:He is fiercly loyal to his clan and his beliefs, and can go into rages over them. He is truthful and fair, a good friend to all who know him. He is a wise leader and good in battle, as well as being a good mentor. He does not like failing, and tries just about anything to succeed. Though he has not yet meet the right cat, he would like to have a mate someday. *Habit(s):Sometimes kneads his claws when angry *Fears:drowning and failing his clan
*History:He was born in a litter of three, the most active of his family. His siblings would often get upset at him, since he always told his parents when they did something wrong. 2 days before being apprenticed, he and Meadowkit got angry ay each other over who got the moss ball. Mixingkit got so upset, he suddenly burst into flames- destroying the moss and leaving Meadowkit crying. He felt sad for both of them, and tried to make it up to her by giving her a flower on their apprentenceship day. His mentor Flickeringsun taught him well, and at the age of 16 moons he became Mixingcry. When he was 25 moons, Flickeringsun (who was actually the deputy) and Meadowmoss were killed by PoisonClan, after accedentaly crossing the border after a mouse. Picklestar chose him to be deputy, though ever since he's had a distaste towards the poison cats, especially Emeraldstar. 8 moons later, his clan was attacked by a group of rouges, and Picklestar was killed. Being deputy, he then took Picklestar's place as leader, recieving his nine lives and his new name: Mixingstar. Family:none, all dead RP Sample:Mixingstar stormed through his den angrily, pacing back and forth as sand dusted up behind him. His eyes, usually a foresty green, had turned into a firey color from his anger. He knew his deputy was outside outside, waiting for him to calm down before he entered. But somehow that fueled his mood even more........ A flicker of a flame popped up next to him, blinking out almost as soon as it had appeared. How dare Emeraldstar attack them like that........... Trying to take over his clan........ he'd show her. His attempts to control his anger earlier had failed, as another flame burst out, larger this time,leaving a schorched spot on the den floor.
*Cats So Far:3 *Belief in the Guardians:He not not fully believe in them, in the sense that he feels they don't have much power. *Loyalty Scale:8
*Power:Can burst into flames and conjure fireballs. *Downside to Power:Is completly uncontrollable when angry, and becomes vunerable to heat after using his powers. It usually only lasts 5 to 10 minutes, but during that time can be attacked very easily.
Re: Mixingstar~ PyroClan « Reply #1 on Nov 10, 2008, 7:21pm »
Okay, I like the bio except for the Rp sample. That would have to be lengthened a bit. I'm making a new bio form so would you mind remaking this using that? Your other characters are okay, but because this is a high ranking position I hope you understand.
Re: Mixingstar~ PyroClan « Reply #3 on Nov 12, 2008, 7:51pm »
Alright, there are a few changes that need to be made then I'd be happy to accept:
Personality is a minimum of five sentences.
For history could you please add on his birth parents, kithood, apprenticeship, warriorhood, how he became deputy and adjusted, then how he became leader. One sentence isn't enough. It can be brief, but I need more info than what his warrior name was.
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